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B.A. Flight 214, Seat 44D

David Kessler looked over the 16 rows of his section of the plane. What he saw was surprisingly beautiful, a good prelude to his trip.

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Travelblogging from Australia
Can't ya hear...can't ya hear that thunder?

This story did not grab me and draw me in sorry

Pretty well written piece, but really challenging concept. Sometimes I see little stupid things like that and am taken, but it's such a personal thing that even if you can describe it well it's almost impossible to convey it in a way that will elicit the same response in the reader that the beholder had.

He didn't get the job done with me, but it's what in sports terms would be a low-percentage shot anyway. Taking on challenges like that can stretch a writer's skills and as such should be attempted from time to time.