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Jen has had (another) fit of insanity and offered to provide feedback to all you wordies out there who are looking for a break into the market. Check out her post on Written Road for more details. Note that it's first come, first serve, so if you want her opinion, you better e-mail her fast!

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I really learnt a lot from Jen's comments.

1) Start with action, go straight to the point
2) Build up about the main character
3) Describe the surrounding
4) The punch line, draw it out.

Well, these points were specific to my story, which I hope everyone will get to read soon, but these same tips may hold good for several other stories.
Thanks Jen.


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Thanks, Dusty! And also to everyone who submitted stories. I just got one today and I have to let you know that the offer was over as of Xmas Eve. I still haven't gotten back to all 20some of the ones that turned them in and I'm pressed to finish my next book in three weeks.

So, I'm sorry I have to turn you away. Please go through the WR archives in Market Leads and Resources for Writers if you're looking for advice. We will be working on revamping the site this year to make it easier to go through the archives, so bear with us for a few months.

And as always, write! There's tons of crap being published, surely enough room in the book & magazine world for all of us to get our gems in. :-)


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